Now, to preface this judging, I must say that this was one of the more difficult matches to judge. That makes sense, being the finale. As such, my decision came down to some pretty small differences that set the two entries apart.
But enough of that introduction business. Let's get down to the meat, bones, and decisions, eh?
FINAL ROUND
VS
GO!
Now, Mangakawa and Hopeless both have pretty different styles of depiction. Hopeless tends to go for big expressions while Mangakawa goes for subtler shifts. Both styles are not only appropriate, but ultimately fitting for a finale between the two characters. Peter Bread is an adorable furry kid with a seriously messed up past and a big shiny berserker button. Crispin Alexander is a dour, dead man with a large nose and a penchant for royally screwing himself over. Peter's story of experimentation and innocence could easily have become wholly clichéd and amateurish if not handled in Hopeless's broad but careful strokes, and Crispin could easily have become dull and (excuse my pun) lifeless had Mangakawa not handled him with care and subtlety.
Both entries travel along a very similar plotline. This shows to me that Mangakawa and Hopeless had some very in-depth dealings and worked hard to make sure not to bastardize each other's characters. This is refreshing after seeing a great number of battles where the aim was to further only one's own character and one's own personal storyline. At the end of this judging period, both Mangakawa and Hopeless can end their stories the way they intended to.
Now, with what I see as the primary differences aside and the inherent similarity of the stories together, we move on to the bits that made the difference.
Both entries were done primary in a grayscale. Hopeless tended to go for a more Spartan execution of lineart, while Mangakawa used a great deal of gradation and splashes of subtle color. In the posture and motion of characters, Hopeless had an edge. I found both of their uses of facial expressions to be equally fair choices, Hopeless tending to the over-the-top, Manga the subtler shifts. Both entries and contestants being at a high quality, one tiny thing came back to irk me time and time again. Hopeless, when "your" is used, it is a possessive. Your entry, your pen, your life. When you intend to say, "You are," you're is the proper spelling.
This was not an easy decision, but I must rule in favor of
's entry for this final round.
Thank you for your persistence, storytelling, and time, Manga and Hopes. I look forward to both of your conclusions with bated breath. I sincerely hope that you enjoyed your time in the "Evil Empire" segment of Byako.